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PostPosted: 18-12-2004, 14:27    Post subject: What do you think? Something from Shamoth. Quote selected Reply with quote

Fallens fall down on their knees
Rise their hands to the light
In the abyss, where horned evil
Rules with their cult
Thy light of truth fils
Their thoughts in unholy sacrifice
Wickled in the trapes of evil might
Searching for freedom and catharsis
They are victims and offers
They are harvesters and seeds of evil
Cult of true light will reach
The highest top of secret
The secret of dark existence
Dogma of the might was written
And the books charmed in brightness are
Absorbing abyss of false
Trough the shining of knowledge
Trough the wisdom of the ancients
Let the blinds see
Let the deafs hear
What the ancient cult of thy light brings
What secret proclamates
Let the time be a teacher
Let it show us the way of knowledge paths
Created through the hundred years
By the power of existence and death.!!!


Lord Shamoth


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PostPosted: 14-05-2005, 14:39    Post subject: Quote selected Reply with quote

I like it. Very well written poem, good job. (oh, I can tell you that if you write a lot of poems, you could check the fictionpress.com site, and make a new profile there - it's more known site and I think you'd get more reviews)
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PostPosted: 18-06-2005, 00:23    Post subject: Quote selected Reply with quote

Thax. I apreciate it. It is one night poem. Thax
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PostPosted: 24-06-2005, 12:16    Post subject: Quote selected Reply with quote

Although there are some grammatical errors the poem is nice and interesting.
Reading it is like a marching .. I mean the rhythm is sort of regular ..
I think it makes a great mood, as a whole..

btw. I think one-night-poems are very often great. indeed, yours is another one!

cheers!
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PostPosted: 26-06-2005, 19:19    Post subject: Quote selected Reply with quote

Thanx for your opinion. I know that my English is grammatically poor but I it will be better soon.
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PostPosted: 09-07-2005, 13:27    Post subject: Quote selected Reply with quote

I belive it should be "what do you think?" :P
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PostPosted: 11-07-2005, 12:31    Post subject: Quote selected Reply with quote

of course, my bad sorry
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